Date: 10/29/2013 3:58 PM Title: A third player has joined the game
That 3some was pretty hot as well as unexpected. Kirk definitely likes to watch. I'd love to see what happens as Kirk and Spock explore their relationship further.
Author's Response: You are truly too kind! Thanks, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed the story and that it surprised you as much as it surprised Jim :)
Date: 10/29/2013 4:33 AM Title: The second match
wow, that is not how I would envision a first time. I was imagining how Spock must feel in the position that you put him in. He was kind of asking for it but it must be quite shocking all the same. I hope Spock will get a chance to take the initiative...
Let's just say I think you may enjoy the last chapters ^_^
Date: 10/29/2013 4:25 AM Title: A saucer of milk
gaaahhhh that was so awesome. Your take on mind melding and Vulcan culture is so unique and insightful. I love to read a story that isn't a retread of 50 other stories. You've pulled out things I've never thought of before after watching these episodes so many times. Very well done. Kudos. The whole cat metaphor really worked for me and I thought the mind meld and Kirk's thoughts were very realistic. I like how Spock cut through that... you foreshadowed that in the sparring scene, that Spock wants more than to play with Kirk, he wants to posess him, but Kirk heard "pet" and missed that. Also interesting that this is the type of story where the line between preslash and slash is so thin, but that's cool. I think it's a TOS thing.
Thank you for your kind, constructive and thoughtful input, Hypatia. I value it that not only that did you read the story, but found the time to comment on it as well. I am most honored! It is just wonderful how you put time and effort into your comments and actually help writers develop themselves :)
I admit that I'm still learning about Vulcans and the whole Star Trek canon, and need to check many details as I write. Good to hear that I've succeeded in understanding it, while not copying what everyone else has written. As for the story being a TOS thing, I take that as a compliment! Hopefully you don't find the last chapters too strange or out-of-style, since they are somewhat different from the first chapters. I tried to add a bit variation to the story, and now I'm just hoping it wasn't too much...
Once again thank you!
Date: 10/20/2013 5:02 PM Title: Competition
I must admit, I am a sucker for get-togethers between Kirk and another guy. Provided Spock approves, of course, and I'm glad he seems to here. Look forward to good times to come, no pun intended.
Author's Response: We'll see what (or who) will come ;)Thanks for the comment!
Date: 10/17/2013 10:09 PM Title: A consolation prize
Wow! Fantastic foreplay chess, followed by an incredible hot and erotic sex. I sputtered when the person passing by in the corridor tried to intervene. Very well done piece of erotica!
Aae, thank you Dunyazad!