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Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2013 12:00 AM Title: Fin

Oh - this was wonderful!  You've done so much here - Spock, yes Spock in character and yet torn by the lack of control.  This is brilliant, "My every failure is laid out before me, my formerly dominated fears are now my masters, my deepest regrets the unforgiving tormentors."  And they sehlat tooth and holograph of Jim... both feel right to me.  Thank you so much for sharing this story.  I also love, "...mine are slippery with emerald warmth."  Very, very nicely done.



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thank you so much

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2013 11:59 PM Title: Fin

Oh - this was wonderful!  You've done so much here - Spock, yes Spock in character and yet torn by the lack of control.  This is brilliant, "My every failure is laid out before me, my formerly dominated fears are now my masters, my deepest regrets the unforgiving tormentors."  And they sehlat tooth and holograph of Jim... both feel right to me.  Thank you so much for sharing this story.  I also love, "...mine are slippery with emerald warmth."  Very, very nicely done.

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Date: 09/21/2013 11:56 PM Title: Fin

Oh - this was wonderful!  You've done so much here - Spock, yes Spock in character and yet torn by the lack of control.  This is brilliant, "My every failure is laid out before me, my formerly dominated fears are now my masters, my deepest regrets the unforgiving tormentors."  And they sehlat tooth and holograph of Jim... both feel right to me.  Thank you so much for sharing this story.  I also love, "...mine are slippery with emerald warmth."  Very, very nicely done.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2013 9:22 AM Title: Fin

Great stuff :)  I think it would be a completely logical end for Spock.

Reviewer: Dunyazad Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2013 2:07 AM Title: Fin

Beautiful. compelling and elegantly written.

Reviewer: DivaPammy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/2013 2:04 AM Title: Fin

Oh! This was sad and sweet. I was so moved by this. I still have tears in my eyes.

Beautiful. Heart wrenchingly beautiful.

Thank you for sharing it.

 

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