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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

gasping growling groans
scorching fire licking my bones
writhing animals in heat
flying sparks where we meet

Author's Response:

OMG..You're back. Thanks for reading and leaving a very hot poem. You're amazing.

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2013 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 1

guh, such teases those two.  But I'm pretty confident it will work out all right in the end.  Seems like they're having fun getting there.



Author's Response:

Indeed they are. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2013 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks my friend.

Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2013 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent interplay between words and pictures!

(I loved the look of "suffering" on Kirk's face, and the poem played it up wonderfully!)

~AKO



Author's Response:

I am glad you think I got it right. It helps to have an image to spark you muse into action.

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