Date: 09/15/2013 9:04 PM Title: Silent Spaces
Incredible. Delicious, delectable - and those words are inadequate and do not begin to convey my appreciation. This is just... it - I really am stunned with this, stopped by this. It is beautiful. Aargh. I don't have words that fit it. It makes ME breathless, worldless and wanting.
T h a n k y o u s o m u c h. s.p.a.c.e. This poem soars.
Date: 09/15/2013 3:10 AM Title: Silent Spaces
Damn, this was good. I love full circle poetry, and this is what you did...your title, is shown again towards the end.. You describe every erotic moment when they are in the heat of passion...through brief little sentences...from 3 words to 6...and you make us visualize it all.
Excellent work...Write more at your convenience.