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Reviewer: fangurl47 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/08/2013 3:09 AM Title: None

wow...just wow

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/2012 9:44 PM Title: None

profound

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/15/2012 8:45 PM Title: None

Nicely Done. I really liked the repeating pattern of the words.  How the  action is followed by thought, thought is followed by fantasy. It gives you just a taste of the erotic which is what makes it so sexy.

Reviewer: MarauderGirl Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/16/2012 6:24 AM Title: None

I like it...
Mirror verse chars are so devilish xd
it would be interesting to see how it ends that night

Reviewer: Judin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2010 12:03 PM Title: None

I've never been so turned on by poetry before. And I greatly enjoyed the repeating pattern of action/contemplation/fantasy.

Reviewer: JSS Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 2:00 AM Title: None

I absolutely LOVE this poem! So hot and dark... I enjoyed this thoroughly!

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