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Reviewer: Zzickle Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2014 6:32 PM Title: Part One: Nyota’s No-win scenario

Pick a tense - past or present - and stick to it. This story is all over the place between the two.

Reviewer: char Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: 09/01/2013 3:37 PM Title: Part three: 101 Dating Rules I don't follow



Reviewer: AuroraMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2013 8:29 PM Title: Part three: 101 Dating Rules I don't follow

loved this story! :) looking forward to the continuation of this story.

Reviewer: laustic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2013 8:24 PM Title: Part three: 101 Dating Rules I don't follow

This was incredibly enjoyable to read.  Excellant work!

Reviewer: kitbaker123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2013 4:45 PM Title: Part three: 101 Dating Rules I don't follow

Thank you! I thoroughly enjoyed this story.  I am not usually a fan of anything involving a threesome but having read your earlier works I was prompted to give this a go!  You have a very distinctive 'voice' running through your work (yes, I have read your profile and I am in awe of the effort you make to post fiction).  Your Spock and Uhura are particularly amazing in all of your work: the way you write fits perfectly with the slightly cool aspects of their personalities.  Kudos to you and keep on going, please! 

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2013 9:46 AM Title: Part three: 101 Dating Rules I don't follow

Somebody needs to take up on your offer of the three some chapter.  I think you should just talk dirty to your computer. 

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