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Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2014 9:11 AM Title: Ten

So now I still see no mention of Kirk's shoulder wound and it's as if it never happened.  I just wonder what was the point of having him shot if it was going to never be mentioned again.  It would have made the last chapter way better if Spock and Nyota has to take care of Kirk who was burning w fever from infection in his wound.  Perhaps I missed a section somewhere??

Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2014 9:07 AM Title: Nine

I feel after reading this chapter - that there is a chapter missing between this one and the last one because I was excited Kirk was injured when he was shot, Spock and Uhura seemed worried and stayed because he was wounded - yet now in this chapter there was barely - if any - mention of his injury.  I was shocked to see chapter start with Nyota napping cz in character I felt she wld never nap before making sure Kirks shoulder was tended to.

Reviewer: Nightshade sydneylover150 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/17/2014 1:38 AM Title: Epilogue

I hope you write a sequel!!  Great story!

Reviewer: Bree Thompson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/24/2013 9:13 PM Title: Epilogue

Keep makng stories, please. These are fantastic.

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2013 9:56 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing this story - I enjoyed it.
It seems like we get a sequel?

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/2013 3:24 PM Title: Twenty Four

Oh shit, what should be that?

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/06/2013 10:46 AM Title: Twenty Three

Are you going to knock Jim up? Just curious ummmm and hopeful. Lol. I have a weird mind. 

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/27/2013 11:19 AM Title: Sixteen

Please God. Sarek and Winona. That is all. 

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2013 10:44 AM Title: Fourteen

Oh my. So good. 

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/24/2013 2:44 PM Title: Thirteen

Nyota is still pregnant right?  They will have to tell people eventually. We need a three some please. 



Author's Response:

:) Yeah, she's still pregnant. As to the threesome...:)

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2013 4:08 PM Title: Eleven

We need Nyota to walk in on them and join in. Just a suggestion. LOL.

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2013 6:47 PM Title: Prologue

Some like it hot... next time..

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2013 4:29 PM Title: Seven

So they are bondmates.

I belive i missed something in the last part. I will read it in a second time.

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/01/2013 9:30 AM Title: Six

Jim slowly take the three way bond, but is a little confus...

well written.
sry - my english is not good enough to say exactly what i mean.

Author's Response:

I'm hazarding you mean the dream scene at the beginning?

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2013 6:17 PM Title: Five

smile

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2013 4:37 PM Title: Three

Three-way bond--coll concept!

Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/21/2013 7:01 AM Title: Prologue

You should warn for uhura/spock/jim threesome bond

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/19/2013 1:58 PM Title: Four

oh my...

how sad...

good he have good friends now...

Reviewer: pintospirk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/17/2013 1:15 AM Title: Three

Oh wow.  Yes awesome.  Three way bond. 

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/16/2013 1:24 PM Title: Three

My God, what a mess!

I'm very eager to see where this going on.

Good written.

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