Date: 07/03/2013 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I really like having something to read at times that is just a nice gentle moment that affirms their importance to each other. And I loved this, "Spock's expression didn't change but it was as if the sun had risen in the midst of night."
Date: 07/03/2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, tender scene between them combined with serious character dynamics re how strongly Spock is driven to protect Kirk -- something they are going to have to work out if when they become lovers. I want to see that serious talk back on the ship.
Love it when Spock says, "everything you feel, I feel a thousand-fold." It's a great way for Spock to confess his feelings and hints at that deep, buried Vulcan passion we can't wait to see.
Date: 07/02/2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1
Dude. If this is what you call slipping, I'd hate to know what you'd call my work. This absolutely lives up to everything I've come to expect from a CMM work. Great job. I was honestly concerned that Jim was going to be angry there for a second, but then it turned loving and I love loving. Thank you so much.