Date: 11/24/2013 11:35 PM Title: Epilogue
Love the way you brought us full circle, to Edith's insight into Spock's devotion to Kirk, and completed that insight by shoiwng Kirk's devotion to Spock.
Aww thanks!! (to both of your reviews)
What I mainly love about their realtionship is that their devotion to eachother is so equal. I'm glad i got that idea across :)
Date: 11/24/2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Mmmm ... I like where this is headed. Also enjoyed the reference to Iraq and the thought that Edith's ideals could have prevented that.
For me, it's a very sad/powerful moment in the actual episode, where they realise her ideas were right, but just at the "wrong" time.
Date: 07/06/2013 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
I didn't think think Spock's breakdown was unlikely. In fact, I agree with you completely, that Spock would react immaturely, if only because jealousy would be a new emotion for him, one he had no defenses to. I love the chess analogy. Ok, I just love the story. I'll stop now.
Date: 07/04/2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love the latest chapter. How could he play chess with Edith...This game is reserved for Kirk and Spock. ...Spock's reaction seeing them play together is normal, when you're in love. Spock felt betrayed, and anger...Jim isn't sleeping well tonight, serves him right.
Hopefully, Jim will stop running after Edith...
Looking forward to more.
Date: 06/30/2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
This has a lovely humour, Kirk and Spock, like the odd couple, clearly wed forever but totally unaware. You have captured this so well. I really enjoyed. It is so true but people who can cook have no concept of the mind set of those who cannot. Love Kirk not being able to cook.
Date: 06/17/2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Spock in jammies, from that time period....Oh, what a sight that would have been. Great beginning...Love the fact you have Spock clueless as to why he is reacting so negatively towards Edith, in regards to the captain....Looking forward to more....Love it.
Thanks! Glad I described Spock's view coherently :) It can be hard to write from a Vulcan's point of view!