Reviews For Babel
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Reviewer: WeirdLittleStories Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/23/2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE this line:  <i>"It only sounds crazy until you remember this is Jim we're talking about."</i>  Also this one:  <i>"I'll let you ponder the illogical mess that we know as Jim Kirk while I get something to drink.</i>

Reviewer: aerlalaith Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

This was great.  The majority of Starfleet not being completely enamoured with Kirk for once was a much needed fresh point of view.  Also, (and I've noticed this for your other fics as well) you are a master of "show, don't tell" which is awesome.  The dialogue and the action move the story along nicely, and I enjoyed Kirk and Spock being awkward at each other.  Scotty's failure at public speaking was a nice touch as well.



Author's Response:

Scotty struck me as the too-fast techspeak, freezes-in-place kind when it comes to public speaking.  Thanks very, very much!

Reviewer: muggy44 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 1

VERY GOOD, XOXOXOX



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

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