Reviews For Inextricable
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Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2013 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow.  Very biting.  Applause.  Another one where I have a hard time picking out a favoritie line - but I think it must be:

Life is like a blade across a bone

Scratching along, uneasy monotone.



Author's Response:

LOL thank you.  You're reading all  my stories!

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love rhymes, and this was perfect. I read each line, and could see it all before me.

Well done.



Author's Response: Thank you so much, you have no idea how please I am when you comment on my poetry.

Reviewer: PaintedBird Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Liked this one.  A big raw but the MU is pretty living on the edge, isn't it?  Keep it up, girls.  I like what you're doing.



Author's Response: Raw... yep, I was trying for raw.... Mirror is difficult to write poetry for... all the nicest words are all mushy ones, it seems ... thank you!

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

Mirror verse!! Nice! LOL. Whou would have thought thise would be the result of this line: And fucked me senseless like a cheap porn star. ? AHAHHAHAAH. Well done, as usual. *grits teeth at prospect of touching mirror* You know I've avoided it until now, right?



Author's Response:

I thought we were playing to our strengths, vis if you were doing porn, I was doing Mirror.  You could try something new?  Anyway, I have conceded the war for now because you got 11 reviews on a poem.  (Uploads chocolate wine, three dust-bunny/tribble hybrids and trophy to Pam)

For Now.....

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