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Reviewer: AKO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 4:14 PM Title: Dance Again

The anxiety, the fear, the hope, the tension...

AHHHHH!

~AKO



Author's Response:

I am ever impressed that you continue to read a format which thou dost proclaim to hate...LOL :) Thanks for the read and for reviewing! <3

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 1:59 PM Title: Dance Again

It's early for these feels.... Gah. This is very nice. I don't know much about poetry but I know what I like. I like this. I want to build it a blanket fort and cuddle with it... I need more coffee.

No but really this was lovely.



Author's Response:

Lol, sorry for the feels so early in the morning! In my defense, I posted it last night! lol. Thank you for the kind words. ;) I honestly don't know that much about poetry either. Aside from that it's put into stanzas, can rhyme or not, depending, and that iambic pentamter is overrated. LOL!

 

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 8:06 AM Title: Dance Again

This is lovely.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Unfortunately the formatting went all wonky and I had to fix--wtf, archive??

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 5:52 AM Title: Dance Again

Just beautiful. I can just see them there in sickbay, and Jim's smile...and that hand clasp. They're dancing girl...well done.

P.S. When you wrote this, was it formatted this way. Just curious. It looks bunched together. Not sure if it was intentional.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Dhaliaxat! And now, it was formatted right yesterday. I don't know what happened, but I have fixed it. Thank you for pointing it out! :) <3

Reviewer: T nash-veh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/10/2013 2:17 AM Title: Dance Again

This song of my soul, long without listen .... lovely.  



Author's Response:

Awwwwe, thank you. :)

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