Date: 04/04/2013 9:07 AM Title: Fifth Harmonic
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww and the dedication more awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Thank you so so so so so so much! :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
PS it's a pretty brilliant bit of poetry, too.....;
LOL! I'm glad you liked it. :P You're welcome. Thank you for being an ear, lol
Date: 04/04/2013 4:21 AM Title: Fifth Harmonic
Oh I really do love this. Pamdizzle - I know I haven't read everything you've posted by any means, but this is one of my favorites. It just has such ... depth, weight, presence, heft ... clarity. Bravo - well done. It has no pretense ... "Brokered and accepted" - perfect.
Lol. This is fairly different from what I normally write, actually, lol. I am glad you like it though. I have an odd habit of spontaneously bursting into poetry at the drop of a hat whenever the mood strikes, lol ahahahah.
Date: 04/04/2013 12:22 AM Title: Fifth Harmonic
You people! I am literally EATING my hatred of poetry!
"But known and felt. Ever felt."
The repetition is so effective and moving!
Awwweeeee, thank you Vix. I thought it was right to place emphasis there as a reassurance to Jim, you know? I'm so glad you took time to read it, even though you claim to hate poetry. :) <3
Date: 04/03/2013 10:14 PM Title: Fifth Harmonic
This is SO Spock!! Very moving, very well-written...I'm a sucker for poetry and this one rates quite highly, imho! Great job...
Thank you, Jean. I'm happy with how it turned out, actually. If you find a suitable mannip for it, I'd be pleased to post it with the poem. It doesn't feel right, since I'm so used to Denise's poems w/pic on here to have the poem and no pic, LOL