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Reviewer: Scarlettmoon7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2013 3:12 PM Title: Entwine

Heh, yay! That's true, how would kirk always know if it's an ensign or lieutenent calling? And then having to correct the captain? Awwwkward.

Author's Response:

Oh, believe me, Kirk KNEW the rank of the communications officer who disturbed him!  His deliberate use of a lower rank was an indication as to how pissed off he was at being interrupted!

I thank you so much for reading!

~AKO

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2013 2:53 PM Title: Entwine

And again: well done.

I'm happy they are together again. I like your resolution.

Author's Response:

Thank you, Sera, I know you were upset there for a while!

~AKO

Reviewer: Celes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2013 9:26 AM Title: Entwine

I like how Kirk is dealing with the interruption. xD

Gol/V'Ger is my favorite K/S Time. Its so deeply emotional.

I'm also curious how authors discribe the mind melt. Yours reminds me of how often the first contact or kiss between soulmates are charactersized, with the colours and muisc.
So i think its fits perfect with Kirk and Spock.


Please be patiend with my errors , english is not my first language.

Looking forward to read more,


your friend (annette)



Author's Response:

I have met many people to whom English is not their first language, and I have nothing but admiration for them.  To be able to fully converse, and even WRITE in a language other than one's original is monumental.

Your English is beautiful, and you honor me with your praise for my story.

~AKO

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/14/2013 6:45 AM Title: Entwine

I loved the humor is this piece...and the end of course...yum...I also enjoyed their joining of body and soul.  It was so romantic...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The humor was fun to write, after all the angst.  And I'm afraid that to everyone's disappointment, my flavor of slash is the romantic kind, not the graphic stuff.  But hey, the romantic kind can STILL get you hot and juicy. *wink*

~AKO

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