Date: 03/12/2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Lovely, lovely. my favotie part:
"I’d rather remember one minute
Of the life we had before, than a year
Of the half-life that is all I have here."
Thank you so much for posting it. Feel better soon!
Thank you. Isn't it funny how different people like completely difference sections of the poem? I feel better already having read all these lovely reviews, thank you..
Date: 03/12/2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
Made me smile as well. I really like these two lines.. But this new reality is better,this fusing heat,
This sudden arc of desire between us now,
Love your poetry my friend. Awesome job, feel bad that you're sick though. Get better okay..
Thank you so much, glad you liked it. And thanks for the well wishes, I have tried everything to kill this cold and I think I may have beaten it....
Date: 03/11/2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
OooooOOoooooh, nice post WoK. So very, very lovely. Hooray for head colds in Australia!! lol. More fluff! More fluff! More fluff!
Thank you so much. I cannot share your enthusiasm for the head cold, though LOL. But I promise more fluff will be forthcoming as soon as I can muster up the energy.