Date: 06/14/2014 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
You really captured the mood of that episode perfectly. I always knew (and some others have, too.) that this episode was as much about the companion and Cochrane as it was about Jim and Spock. You might wanna read The TOS Commentary on Fanfiction.net. That is just hilarious and yet so true.
Thank you so much. And I will go off and find that commentary. It sounds intriguing!
Date: 01/30/2013 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well that was very fascinating
I do love when humans get smacked with their own cultural perceptions
Australia is a very newly-mixed country, and cultural perceptions are constantly up and biting us on the ass over here! LOL Thanks for review!
Date: 01/27/2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEEE, super squee. lol. That was just what I needed this evening. So glad I finally found some time to sit down and read this weekend. lol.
Thanks! Nice to know my story added something positive to someone else's evening.
Date: 01/26/2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aw, I would love it if you wrote a Spock POV for this, just to see his thought process from the conversation about Cochrane and human issues, explanation about the Vulcans to observing Jim throughout the day and finally this.
I wonder if he had a mental list of other alien men aboard the ship and spent his time thinking of what would Jim want in a potential mate and how that would fit each individual. And actually found a match! Somebody other than himself and fully expected their name to be the one Jim says when he asks him who's the guy :D
OK will do that asap. Thanks for the suggestion.
Date: 01/26/2013 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, why stop it there...I loved this...the conversation...it was so intimate...even Spock smiling felt normal, cos he does sometimes....well he sure did in the pilot...right in your face smile...thanks very much for finding this and posting...Great job.
Aw, thank you. He does smile, when he is alone with someone he trusts.