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Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

a problem with only one answer

the easy rythym of math

despair creeping like a cancer

when I had always trusted my path

Author's Response:

Very good my friend...great job. I love your rhyming reviews.

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2013 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

failure is how we learn. I think it might take more than maths to get him out of this!

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great imagery, really imaginative.  Clever idea of using Spock's logic and maths as like a prison...  as he grows throughout the series he might well start to see it more and more in that way...  Loved it!

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