Date: 09/29/2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
This was exceedingly hot - the love scene absolutely scorching.
I also enjoyed the underlining psychology of the story, too, particularly in regards to Jim. You showed a deft hand by adding layers to this piece without those layers distracting from the smut.
What a marvelous piece!
Date: 09/29/2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't really think that could have been any hotter. Seriously. Wow. I need a cigarette and cold shower after that. And the sweetness at the end was just cherries and hot fudge on top of awesome. Will beg and grovel in complete adoration for more!
Love and cherries,
Date: 09/27/2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
Spock, who had already taken the bed by the window and was unpacking his underwear to make sure it didn’t crease, ... hahahaha creased undies. So uptight.
I really liked the way Spock told Bones to get lost.
I'm glad you picked up o the underwear bit, because I can just imagine Spock not wanting his briefs to have a crease in them, lol.