Date: 01/03/2018 9:34 PM Title: Five Years Can Bring Great Changes
I love this story. It's different than a lot of KS fiction. I like that Original Spock adopts Nu Kirk as a baby. The part where Spock is teaching Jim to crawl was adorable. Every month or 2 I check to see if it's been updated. I was really happy back in July with the update. I am worried about Tarsus, but excited to get on with the story.
Date: 08/02/2017 5:23 AM Title: An Infinite Number of Possibilities
Thank you for the update. I can't wait for the next chapter. i still have not figured out if ksarchive has an alert for when I story I like has been updated :(. So I will keep checking back. I really enjoy your stories and hope you will finish this one this year, maybe in the next few weeks :) . You are one of my fav. authors. Wonderful writer.
Date: 07/31/2017 6:09 PM Title: Five Years Can Bring Great Changes
Wonderful part, but I'm filled with dread at the thought of this Jim Kirk on Taursus IV. :( i'm feeling bad for poor Spock, but clearly Jim needs some freedom to come to his own understanding od their situation. :( I think the time jump was very well done, and if that's what brought you back to us - it's all good.
Thanks so much!,
Date: 07/23/2017 4:57 PM Title: An Infinite Number of Possibilities
How often a fic finishes because you can't get between two elements of the tale. I love your idea, don't ...just fast forward. Actually life is full of spans of time when nothing much happens.
Once in awhile in a story, there's no other choice but tot move ahead.
Date: 07/22/2017 4:10 AM Title: Five Years Can Bring Great Changes
Welcome back! It's so wonderful to be back in this universe again -- I've missed it so! It looks like you jumped ahead just the right amount to leave us with the perfect cliffhanger. Just please, don't make it last too long!
Date: 09/22/2016 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 16: Not Totally Reassured
Once again you have hooked me. Great story so far. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Now that the two are together I am sure Spock will start to get better. I can see that Jim's natural "flirting" could be a problem as they grow up. Please update SOOOOOON!!!!
Thank you again for sharing your talent with us.
Date: 08/20/2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 16: Not Totally Reassured
Oh my...so much here. Spock's concerns and the fact that he was still worried enough - even after Jim's assurances - to go to his father, sweet and a little sad. I think that Sarek did a great job with that - especially since he decided not to tell Spock that there probably would be more crushes. Oy. But...I didn't see the sickness coming. Poor Spocky and poor Jim! And being apart form each other was just about the worst thing that could happen - emotionally and, apparently, physically. I'm glad that Jim decided to take things into his own, small hands. Heh. Love this story!
Thanks so much!
Date: 08/20/2016 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 15: Growing Pains
Awww...the sweetness, it got in my eyes...and made them teary. Heh. Seriously, though, I really am teary. First, I just loved the interaction between Selik and Spocky. wo sweet to seem counsel his small self. Awww. And poor Spocky's trauma that Jim might leave him...sad, but Jim promised and I'm sure he really will take him with him wherever he goes. So sweet. :) I just love this story. *happy sigh*
Thanks so much!!!