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Reviewer: FanficTrekkie Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/25/2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 3: Love Connection Undeniable

Not a huge deal but you keep capitalizing words that don't need to be capitalized like the word beautiful for example.  You may want to have someone just proof read each chapter to fix any grammatical errors.  Good story though otherwise!



Author's Response:

OK. Thanks

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 3: Love Connection Undeniable

I love IDIC. It is the basic principle that all fanfiction follows XD

At least I think of it that way!



Author's Response:

Yes, it does allow for a lot of fun! THANK YOU, again, and as always, for the feedback...

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 3: Love Connection Undeniable

:-)

Author's Response:

Many thanks, as usual xx

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 2: Together Forever - Reunited

Pon farr? Still scared about it, Spock? Oh the sweetheart! He'll be fine. They'll be fine :3

Author's Response:

Yes, BLESS x I might yet explain a bit about why; other questions, arising from those they ask in the story, keep, annoyingly, occurring to me. I think I'm done at last, then, hours later? And, I have to make an interesting scene out of a few questions! I'm afraid my fics are always the same! THANKS for the feedback - kind feedback is forever welcome!

Reviewer: Sera Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 2: Together Forever - Reunited

Thank you..... but....
I deleted my review for 3 times because i thought my words and that what I mean was wrong. lol

Author's Response:

It's fine, don't worry.

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 2: Together Forever - Reunited

Oh so nice - you continue.
Very cute. I love it.

I wonder if they can come back to their universe??? But it is good for them to be in this universe, all friends are death in the other. Nobody missed them, or? Better to be in this universe???

It's not so easy to write my thoughts in english - it's not my native language...

Author's Response:

You did better than I would manage in your language, I guarantee it.

I wanted them in this universe, so it'd be cool to have them both available in one universe.

THANK YOU for the feedback!

 

Reviewer: lovelycake Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 2: Together Forever - Reunited

Awww cute! Together again...at last!



Author's Response:

THANKS xx

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

what is, is

Take the bad with the good and enjoy what follows



Author's Response:

Yes, though I have realised I need to tie up a few matters, so a sequel is likely on the cards, which means I'll get moaned at by some people! Thanks for being one of the kind ones!

Reviewer: jessica499499 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

A little hard to follow, but not bad at all.



Author's Response:

Yes - it dawned on me last night - I have to tie up a few matters!

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Meaning it was incredibly sweet, lol. Nerd joke, my apologies. I believe you about the email. I'm not sure why I'm not getting them. I checked the spam filters too. I dunno. You're not the only having this problem though. A few people have sent me 'reminder' emails as follow ups to original messages that I never got. It boggles the mind! Fucking yahoo, but I hate every other mail service...



Author's Response:

Yeah, it sort of twigged on me - the sweet thing - but I was also figuring: Toothache?! Don't worry - I got it in the end!

Reviewer: Sera Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wonderful.

I also have a dream that old Spock meets old Jim again. And Q is a real good Option to do this.

Thank you.

Author's Response:

Yes it's been doing my head in; still don't think I've quite done the story I really want to do..!My brain can't grasp enough of it! THANKS for your Kindness though xx

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Awweeeee......I think I just got a cavity from reading this, lol



Author's Response:

Good to hear from you. I promise I did try to email you back. A cavity?!!??

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/10/2012 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 1

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.... (flips over and does major tribble purr).

Can tribbles flip over to purr?



Author's Response:

You should know; apparently, you are one! Thanks for the review! xx Did you ever do a version of that fic where you re wrote the end to NOT include the bit where (albeit totally willingly) Kirk was held at the feet and hands by those Vulcans? I loved the4 fic until that bit.

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