Date: 11/19/2019 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well written moments, story of what could have happened between STIII and STIV! Even tho Kirk is kind of struggling with not knowing exactly what is the Link between Spock and McCoy...he is not letting it get in the way of trying to still help both of his friends. And while Spock is still regaining a sense of himself, he is still pulled to Kirk. Great job!
Date: 09/08/2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow. You've made me tear up! This is so lovely :) It is really interesting to read about things more from McCoy's perspective - this is something not really touched on in as much detail very often as you have here. I particularly liked the intensely vulnerable sides of McCoy and Spock, and their connection, which is intriguing and also very moving. And, I also like the way that you have an understanding growning between Kirk and Sarek - I think they have a lot in common, in a way.