Date: 05/02/2012 9:48 AM Title: Complete
I saw a few missing words and such, but nothing the rest of us don't over look on a regular basis. Just be a little more careful on your proof reading. I know it's difficult to catch your own mistakes. I usually finish a chapter, then do something else for a little bit before coming back to proof one last time and post. I still don't always catch everything, but I do catch a LOT.
Otherwise, great second song-fic. :D I agree with VCVZ that their relationship in kisses was a really good premiss.
Author's Response: Thank you. Shame on me I so totally did not recheck my work, I'm going to go back and see if I can fix that. Thank you^^