Date: 04/30/2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Dear friend, it isn't easy to write poetry, and you must read someone's poetry many times to understand the meaning behind it, or to understand what the person wishes to convey.
This was sad and hopeful for Jim...the line where he says..why must you leave me again...when he left for Gol and now this....the last three lines are so beautiful, his face a blank slate, but Jim is so happy to see him nonetheless and then pure joy when he remembers his name...and that raised brow...Spock is back.
This shouldn't be your last poem, but many more to come..
Poetry is also something that comes deep from within our soul. No one should think they don't know how to write it. If you have lived a life of many experiences, than you can draw from that when you write. It is truly amazing what you can create.
thanks so much for sharing chere amie....
No it isn't easy and you make it look easy. Interestingly, I had to write 3 poems for my class overall, and despite that I don't think that I'm good at them, the professor said that poetry seems to be my forte. So, I won;t say that this is my last poem. Thanks for reviewing my friend.