Date: 11/27/2013 12:03 AM Title: A Wedding and...A Funeral
Someone suggested that you kill of Selik? Ewww. Please don't! Selik is wonderful, and Spock can't hold a candle to him. Sure, Selik is old, but a loving heart wins over dark hair any day. ;-)
Date: 11/27/2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
It was heart-warming to see New Jim learn how wonderful TOS Spock is (far more wonderful than New Spoc)k. TOS Spock is a truly amazing person, and it was lovely to read of his finding love again.
And your depiction of precocious Vulcan infants was quite amusing. No wonder Spock turned out so smart, if he started like that. :-)
I didn't actually find it credible that Jim would give up being captain of the Enterprise, but I was willing to suspend disbelief for the sake of such a heart-warming story.
Date: 05/18/2012 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Haven't finished reading yet but i just wanted to say that this is a great story so far. just finished chapter 7 and i noticed that it seems to be incomplete the chapter just cuts off mid sentence. figured i'd see if it was a mistake. well off to read more i can't get enough of your stories i hope for more of this pairing i haven't seen many good ones, like this is. ;)
Date: 05/10/2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
Finally read the end.
I love your stories, the depth of characters, plot and interaction is very rich; I think this is the reason I am a bit let down by the ending. It seems as if an omniscient narrator came on and said, " ...and this, this and this happened. And they all lived happily ever after." I felt more like I was reading a synopsis for the ending. *sigh* But other than that, wonderful story and thank you for sharing. hugs.
Date: 05/06/2012 3:21 AM Title: The End--One Way or Another
A nice ending for this AU. I'm glad that you didn't write off Selik after all. Jim's going to have quite a large portion of his crew end up nearby, so I'll surmise that there will be many visits by the others in the future, as well. A happy ending indeed.
Date: 05/04/2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story. Against my better judgement you made me believe and love Selik/Jim. I loved everything about this... except for the last chapter. It seemed a little rushed and I would have liked to see more detail about how Spock and Nyota's daughter was integrated into the family as well as more on the twins. I do hope that you will be revisiting this AU in the future because I'd like to see those 9 years fleshed out more. Thank you for a fun read!
Author's Response: The problem with doing as you ask is that it would have added another six chapters to the story. In some cases, there is never a good time to end--I simply have to make a judgment call on how to wrap up a particular tale. But I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Date: 05/03/2012 6:00 PM Title: The End--One Way or Another
I loved this story. . . and I'm very sad to see it end, as I always looked forward to a new chapter. You made me a fan of Selik/Jim [something that I NEVER thought was possible] and created an amazing world for them. I hope sometime you decide to revisit this universe. . . I'd love to see more of Sybok.
And if you ever decide to write another Jim/Selik story, that would be great too :)