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Reviewer: salable_mystic Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/09/2013 8:43 PM Title: Endings Unfold

That was looovely. I could just keep reading this universe for days and days...



Author's Response:

awwww, thank you so much. This was my first shot at TOS, and while I'm certain it needs some cleaning up, I'm very, very glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading. <3

 

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2013 3:08 PM Title: Endings Unfold

Nooooooooooooooooooo...why is it over? I was looking forward to more family styff!!!!

uhum...*pulls herself together* I have to admit I started reading this story when the first chapters were just out and I followed your updates,reaching the middle of the story and then I decided that I'm going insane not knowing what happens next and waited for you to finish the story. What a lovely treat! It feels good to finally reach the end and sad that it's actually over.I look forward to more amazing works from you.uhum...how about  more slaves?*hides*



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you for all your reviews. I'm sorry it had to eventually come to an end. I did have a good time writing this one, it was my first ever attempt at the TOS universe. Not a complete failure, I don't think. I'm glad you enjoyed it though and there are definitely more works in the works. :) <3

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2013 2:49 PM Title: Disaster Avoided and Companionable Silence

We had a good thing going on??? Seriously Sullivan cracked me up with that line!XD

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2013 2:18 PM Title: Vulcan, Thou Art Loosed

*nosebleed*

Reviewer: argona Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2013 11:54 AM Title: Is It a Whore's Uniform If You, In Fact, Feel Inclined to Wear It?

Such an awesome chapter.You made Spock wear the Harem outfit! I love you for that! And the words he is whispering to JIm...straight out of a wet dream!



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I may or may not have been having waking wet dreams while writing this part....

 

Reviewer: Ishtar205 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2013 5:29 AM Title: Endings Unfold

Loved it !! It was long and complex and cute^^ Thanks a lot ;b

Author's Response:

Thank you. I've got to back through and comb over some parts of it, but I appreciate you reading and leaving me a nice review. :)

Reviewer: kamikazelover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/01/2013 12:54 PM Title: Endings Unfold

I've been trying to figure out how to articulate my response to this story.  Given that I should have been in bed a couple of  hours ago, it hasn't been going well.  So, I am going to make this short... thank you for writing such a wonderful story.  I hope to see more from you in the future.  Dif-tor heh smusma.



Author's Response:

Oh, thank you so much. If you want more, just visit my page. :P I'm very glad you liked th story. This was my first ever attempt at a TOS and so it's near to my heart.

Reviewer: iadorespike Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2012 8:07 AM Title: Endings Unfold

I just wanted to drop you a note to tell you that I really enjoyed this story.  I love that Kirk made such an effort to do the right thing and I love how much he wanted to build this relationship with Spock.  Lovely.

 

Thanks so much!



Author's Response:

Awe, thank you very much. :D

Reviewer: Mary Kay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2012 4:39 PM Title: Enterprise to the Rescue

I so very much enjoyed this story.  You did a magnificent job on your OC's and I think you captured K-S-Mc wonderfully.  I especially love that it was so much more than just a romance story between K&S, that there was a huge plot going on that held my attention from start to finish.  I do hope that you write more TOS stories, you have a wonderful voice and a very imaginative, creative mind.



Author's Response:

Awe, thank you so much! You have just made my entire week. *blushes uncontrollably for the rest of the day*

I'm doing a TOS K/S one shot for the advent this year...hopefully it turns out alright. I'm extremely happy that you liked this story though, especially my OCs and the back story. Toward the end, my muse and I began the process of divorce and it complicated the ease with which I was able to finish, meaning it was painstakingly hard to do so and involved a lot of pacing and swearing, lol.

Thank you again for the kind words. Coming from you--undoubtedly one of the most talented authors in the fandom, imo--I consider it very high praise. :)

Reviewer: Nocturnal Nightengale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2012 9:16 PM Title: Endings Unfold

Awww I loved it!!!! I'm sad to see this story end, but it was perfect^^ Thank you for a wonderful read^^

Always looking forward to more^^



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2012 5:51 PM Title: Endings Unfold

I had to go back to see where I left off with my last review, and I realized I had just one chapter to go....Wow...getting the parents and grandmother in one room....Jim is amazing isn't he...what he would do for love....

Sullivan is off to Elba II and hopefully he'll get help...

Marriage proposals are so full of emotion aren't they?  Spock was so shocked...but  so pleased by what Jim had done.

Now, there life begins together . Excellent ma chere.......



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked and thanks for following. Not sure when I'll do another TOS... :D

Reviewer: jimali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/13/2012 7:21 AM Title: Endings Unfold

This was soooooo beautiful! I didn't think we were this close to the end of the story, but you finished it perfectly. I didn't have a chance to read before (life is too busy right now) and I'm really glad I took the time today. It's making everything brighter and sweeter...

Sorry to read you were sick. I feel with you. I've been fighting with head colds for about a month now and every time I think I'm well, another one strikes. I hope you're better soon and manage to write some more. Is hubby still working from home?



Author's Response:

Well, I'm finally over it and back to writing. Thanks for taking time to read the story and I'm very glad you liked it. :D To answer your question, no...for now, at least, it appears the whole work from home thing has taken a back seat--THANK GOD.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2012 11:28 PM Title: Endings Unfold

Aphrodite surely smiled down at this fic

OH SAREK! :'3

THIS IS SO SWEET! A flustered Kirk is just adorable!



Author's Response:

Thank you. *blushes* I'm gratified that you think so. I agree that flustered kirk is highly entertaining and too cute for words. :D

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2012 12:29 PM Title: Endings Unfold

Whee! Yaya! Hooray for bodice-rippers!

 



Author's Response:

Agreed, and Hooray, you're my first 300th review for any story I've written on the archive! Thanks! :D

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/2012 11:58 AM Title: Enterprise to the Rescue

Converting fics to e-book is easy. Find out the file type supported by your Kindle and search for a program that will let you convert HTML pages into the file. That's what I do. Then just hook up to your computer with USB cable and copy onto Kindle.

Lots of people have a hard time getting writing done under pressure, but happily, that's when I work best. Can't write when I'm an emotional mess though.

I think this fic is great as is, but if you want to come back to it for tweaking, go for it. We'll love it either way. :)

Author's Response:

Lol, thanks for the lesson on how not to be a dumbass and put shit on your kindle the way Amazon intended, LOL. I'll try it. :D

Reviewer: Tonati Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 11:53 PM Title: Endings Unfold

Thank you very much! I loved the ending, darn romantic side of me! This has been a wonderful trip, one I0ve been glad to tag along.

I hope that your illness goes away soon and that you may gift us with so many other stories.

You will think I am crazy, but I was watching The Love Bug the other night and I could not keep myself from thinking.. "if those two are not Thyla, I do not know who else might be..."

Thanks again and cheers!



Author's Response:

Lol. I LOVE the Love Bug! That was my fave movie as a kid, and yes, those two are thyla, lol. My illness is on its way out and at least now I can breath during sleep, lol. Thank you for tagging along on this one. :)

Reviewer: cowgirl dressage Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 9:11 PM Title: Endings Unfold

How can you not love this final chapter?  I do!  It is sweet, straightforward and true to the charactors.  you rock!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. It has been a long road for this one, lol :D

Reviewer: ironland Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 8:05 PM Title: Enterprise to the Rescue

Done? No,no, this is not enough. Where is their wedding? Where is their honeymoon? Where is their children and their grand-grand-grand-grand-chidren?

Your story is amazing journey. Thank you very very much and wish you health.



Author's Response:

Hey now this baby aint he ks version of the never ending story lol. But I am glad you liked it enough to want it to be haha. Thank you for sticking around and seeing it through. 

Reviewer: ivycross Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 5:40 PM Title: Endings Unfold

Yay! It's done.  I sorry hear that you have been sick. Head colds are the worse.
I loved the last chapter. It was cute and tied things up nicely I thought. Jim's is such a romantic asking Sarek how to propose to Spock and then getting the two of them together to so they can make up.  It warmed the  deeper parts of my heart.



Author's Response:

Jim always kind of struck me as the romantic type lol. I thought this should have a happy romantic ending thelikes of a true Harlequin novel where most or all of the pieces fall into place at the end lol

Reviewer: sierra scarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2012 5:01 PM Title: Endings Unfold

I've been rather busy in RL and missed a few updates, but I'm so glad I caught the ending! Excellent fic. I love how it ends with Jim bringing Sarek and Amanda back into Spock's life. Extra squee! Also, I'm glad to see everything resolved so happily for everyone, except perhaps Chris Pike. Great job.



Author's Response:

Yeah I did kind of shit on chris but I could never stand the guy who played the TOS version in the pilot so that is who I think of when I picture a scene for the guy in this story lol. It was kind of an ongoing rib sort of like my criminal minds and SVU references hahah.

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