Date: 02/15/2014 10:03 PM Title: One Simple Change
I loved this story, it's an angle I've never read before. It was really sad when you pulled Kirk back and we had to leave that other universe to it's fate.
Your grammar and spelling could be a little better (for someone who can't write to save her own ass, I'm being very picky - I read far too much fanfiction) but I liked the way you moved the plot along, and I couldn't fault your storyline or characterisation.
Thank you for writing and posting here!
Date: 10/21/2012 8:48 PM Title: A Bond That Was Never Broken
I just read this straight through from start to finish. I really couldn't put it down, so to speak =p LOVED IT! Cried so many times, espec when Spock says he'll wait for Jim. OMG!! Cutest moment EVER! Thank you for this!
Date: 06/06/2012 6:25 PM Title: A Bond That Was Never Broken
Good job. Nice way to wrapt things up. ;) I like how you gave a glimpse of Sarek and Amanda, who must be feeling the same sense of shock at seeing the alternate versions of the dead spouses. It's nice to see them be able to accept one another and yet distinguish, the same goes for Kirk and Spock.
Date: 05/23/2012 7:22 PM Title: If Death Finds You
Let me guess, you just pulled Jim and Amanda back into Jim's reality? That would be sweet...or did Scotty somehow miraculously not die and save everyone in the other Spock's universe?? OH THE CONFUSION! OH THE POSSIBILITIES! lol
I love how action-packed your story is. Great job so far.