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Reviewer: Fendrion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2013 11:00 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise

Nicely written and very well paced! I like how Bones was a little devious in this one. :) Thank you for writing!

 

Reviewer: Josephine Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2012 5:28 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise

The best Spirk story I ever read, this is soo sweet, so good, I can't get enough of reading it again and again!! =D

Please continue with such excellent work!!!

Reviewer: Greywolf the Wanderer Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 9:45 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise

I would say to you only this: it would help if you had a beta-reader go over this; I think it would help a LOT.  it seems like a good story, but there are so very many errors of grammar, usage, etc., that it obscures what you were trying to say.  frustrating cos it is a storyline I would have loved to read, if I could have made it through to the end...

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2012 6:01 PM Title: A Breaking is a Promise

Beautiful metaphor of the crashing, wild sea and the steadfast shore to represent the K/S dynamic!
Sneaky Vulcans are sneaky! :)
I'm proud of Bones and Uhura!

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