Date: 02/19/2012 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I agree with Shamrock220: you should definitely sneak out and delurk more often, this was very refreshing and different. What an interesting challenge, too, no wonder you could not resist it.
Author's Response: Thank you I enjoyed writing it very much after I got passed the idea of posting anything. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 02/19/2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well done, the one with Kirk going in to kill Khan was the most bittersweet, showing what selfless love is capable of when someone that you love more than life itself is in danger.
You should delurk more often
Author's Response: Thank you very much I'm glad you liked it. I'll see if anything else makes me want to delurk now that I have figured out how to post things. I'm hoping that I can get reviews to work for some reason it never works when I try to review other stories.