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Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/07/2017 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love it.

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/28/2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love the flip in styles now let's repeat in a conscious and aware state

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ah....that was way too short. But then again, I have a bad habit of writing a paragraph and claiming it to be a chapter...so you go girl....more please..................hot damn...

Reviewer: Fugitive Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

"I believe we already did Captain." cracked me up laughing.

I really liked this.  I think you should definitely write more... you have style.


Reviewer: muggy44 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

OH, yes . lots and lots more study. xoxoxox

Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

Love love love it. Nothing new, no, but fun and well done.

Reviewer: Mairin Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Funny, cute, how 'bout more?

Reviewer: SORAL179 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2012 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Just watched Return to Tommorrow, your last line makes me think of Henoch/Spock, This is an interesting one shot. A good start

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