Date: 01/18/2012 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a very sweet and tender recollection; I love the way you've taken those words of love and deep affection, and woven them so wel...like a blanket for them to cover themselves with...like the ultimate in comfort...the image is very nice, too...again, conveys genuine intimacy...
Date: 01/14/2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Brilliant piece. What Alice Nox said, plus more... this poem is beautifully crafted, with nothing excessive, nothing unsaid.... a joy to read.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Fugitive. I appreciate your lovely comment.
Date: 01/14/2012 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have no idea how you do it. Your words, they have this..this..IMPACT. You read them and Jim and spocks feelings thoughts you can almost touch them. Please keep writing more!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Alice, I appreciate it.