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Reviewer: Tydomin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2012 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a really outstanding poem from you, my dear.  It not only captures the emotions of the subjects but is also brilliantly crafted.  I like these two lines in particular:

'Can you see the blue sky up above?

 For I only see you, my love.'

Spoken like a true poet, in my humble opinion. :)  Here's to many more!

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/21/2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Our fingerprints will vanish from the sands
So why not laugh and hold hands
While we're together and can
No one will know where we ran

Reviewer: Jeanne Marie Sosa Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Such loving words...we should all experience that kind of love, tha passion, that resonant delight...what a gorgous poem...magnificent!

It brought tears to my eyes...you are so skilled at recreating emotion...so gifted...

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