Date: 06/21/2012 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is a really outstanding poem from you, my dear. It not only captures the emotions of the subjects but is also brilliantly crafted. I like these two lines in particular:
'Can you see the blue sky up above?
For I only see you, my love.'
Spoken like a true poet, in my humble opinion. :) Here's to many more!
Date: 12/21/2011 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such loving words...we should all experience that kind of love, tha passion, that resonant delight...what a gorgous poem...magnificent!
It brought tears to my eyes...you are so skilled at recreating emotion...so gifted...