Reviews For The Warmth Of Love's Heat Is No Fleeting Fever
Reviewer: Basic Signed 
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Date: 01/16/2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
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[Report This]Date: 01/16/2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Premise good, but writing is sub-par. It was very kitchy and not naturally sounding.
Author's Response:
Well some days of writing are better than others. Thanks anyway. It is what it is.
Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 03/15/2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is one of the ones that I read before and wanted to review but didn't have time. It's a good premise, but it's Jim's dialogue again that keeps me from being transported into story. :)
Author's Response:
I re-read it last night myself... I don't know if I'd change the dialogue. Don't think so, but I might well write a similar scene a little differently in any future story I could yet find myself writing... I always do alter slightly with each story.