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Reviewer: TheStarDragon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: I Swear It To You

Awwww this is so sweet~ I love it how Jim is the only one Spock would ever cry in front of and how Jim is so devoted to him. I feel the love radiating off of those two. I can't help but smile :)



Author's Response:

Thank You. SO Happy to find your feedback! Thank You!

Reviewer: WarpedBullets Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

very nice story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. SO nice to have new feedback on any story, esp. one from some time ago. Thank YOU XX

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 5: Loving You

(But that's how I feel about your story)
Five heartbeat.

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THANK YOU XXXX

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Depths Of Heat That Is No Fever...

Four heartbeat. (I hope you do not think it kitsch)

Author's Response:

I don't mind if it is kitsch xx

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 3: Haven

Three heartbeat.

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to send this feedback xx

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 2: I Swear It To You

Two heartbeat.

Author's Response:

Sweet idea - THANK YOU xxx

Reviewer: nhrc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 1

One heartbeat.

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THANKS xx

Reviewer: Basic Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Premise good, but writing is sub-par. It was very kitchy and not naturally sounding.



Author's Response:

Well some days of writing are better than others. Thanks anyway. It is what it is.

Reviewer: Pamdizzle Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/15/2012 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is one of the ones that I read before and wanted to review but didn't have time. It's a good premise, but it's Jim's dialogue again that keeps me from being transported into story. :)



Author's Response:

I re-read it last night myself... I don't know if I'd change the dialogue. Don't think so, but I might well write a similar scene a little differently in any future story I could yet find myself writing... I always do alter slightly with each story.

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