Date: 11/17/2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for the happy ending.I must admit bones was a little out of control and I would have liked to read a scene about he apologizing to Spock for all those mean words.I know he loves Spock too but it didn't feel like thta in this story and he is the CMO.He is supposed to understand body and Psyche of the crew.
Date: 02/07/2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm glad you went for the happy ending, and I liked the choice to not have them engage in a serious emotional talk once they were reunited. It seemed like Jim had gone through enough of that with Pike and McCoy. Well done.
Date: 11/13/2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
And what a Happy ending you have here. So Happy for it. I was crying like crazy now i need water from being all cried out. God Spock Jumping jim in the Shower about killed me. Bones I wanted to Beat His ass for being so Horrible to Spock. Man can be in Asshole . Very Wonderful Story you have here. xoxooxoxoxoxxoxoox
Date: 11/13/2011 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the shower scene. Love it!
I think you really captured Bones' voice. I would have liked for him to walk in on the lovers or in some other way discover that Spock and Jim are in love. To realize that his understanding of Vulcans and emotion and Spock in particular is wrong.
Date: 11/13/2011 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, this was intense! And your McCoy - wow! Wish I could say more, but your brilliant story impressed me beyond coherency ...