Date: 09/09/2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, a story within a story this was lovely. So well written, I'd like to read the entire story that Jim was enjoying.
Jim's loneliness was palpable, and heartwrenching. I hope Scotty is only going to use his superpowers for good.
To quote Oliver Twist. "Please sir, I want some more."
Wow a quote from Oliver Twist! Very nice. And yes there is more to come and there is another fic that you can read that is complete. It is this same story from Spock's POV and it s much quicker and more smutty than this one, but does have some good emotional angst.