Date: 09/04/2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Kirk was really starting to fall for Eve, and Spock can't understand and places it on the affects of the drug. I love how your building up the underlying emotions in Spock and how he's slowing changing within and how he sees Jim, but doesn't have the experience to understand what it is yet he's feeling. How I interpet this is that Spock is discovering his first real friendship and feeling the first twinges of jealousy seeing Kirk interested in another, but doesn't know or understand what that even is yet.
Hurray, that's exactly what I was hoping to get across: I wanted Spock to be jealous of Eve but not aware that he was jealous. Thanks for the lovely review!