[Report This]Date: 07/10/2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Spock now has him in his lair. What will he do to him, and what will Jim say when he wakes up and sees the good samaritan. Hope you continue.
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
I seriously love this story. The characters are spot on, giving the fic a TOS feeling despite being AU, a quality that I treasure above all. And I love the world-building. You make me see the apartment house in Frisco, feel the chill and smell the tea. And Spock as session musician? That's just awesome, my dear!
Looking forward to your updates and adding the story to my favourites.
Date: 07/09/2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don't give up, it's great so far. I remember reading the first chapter several months ago and am glad to see you back. Don't WIP out on us, now you've set the scene, ok?
[Report This]Date: 07/09/2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
Wow this is great, dont you dare give up. i'm really looking forward to the next chapter and to Jim finding out all about spock.
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
thank you for the new chapter. I'm looking forward to more.
Date: 07/08/2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Yes, drag him back to your lair. Lol
This is interesting! I wonder how severe Spock's "problem" is?
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2012 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh this is very good. I love the universe you are building here. I look forward to the next chapter.
Date: 07/08/2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
OK. I'm very interested where that going on.
Date: 05/03/2012 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
A really good start. Are you ever going topdate it? I hope so, I'd like to know where you're going with it :)
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it. I will carry on, but I am very slow.
Date: 04/20/2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
please keep on.
Author's Response:
Indeed I will - there is a new chapter up now. Wish I wasn't so slow...
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is an interesting twist. Spock as a session musician. I hope he goes to meet Jim soon. Update soon. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is an interesting start. I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Date: 09/26/2011 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Can't wait for more!
Date: 09/26/2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this. What is Irn-Bru?
I really hope you keep going with this, I like your writing style. Also I am intrigued by what Spock's 'problem' may be?
Please write more?
Author's Response:
Irn-Bru is a type of Scottish fizzy drink that is widely available in the UK.
I'm glad you like this! I'll try and carry on with it.
[Report This]Date: 09/26/2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
I really like your take on this story. Can't wait to read the next installment. It truly feels like the original guys...hope you continue..
[Report This]Date: 09/25/2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far it seems to be going well, enough back story to whet the appetite, a touch of foreshadowing. The rhythm seems natural which in fanfic is sometimes hard to do, many of us have so many plot threads spinning in our heads that we struggle not to weave them all in at once.
This has the beginnings of a fine story please continue I look forward to seeing the outcome.
Shamrock220
[Report This]Date: 09/25/2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like it, so please carry on.
Date: 08/18/2011 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooh! Looks good so far. Very atmospheric! I shall look forward to more. :D
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2011 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start, Vulcan should be capitalized. You may want to use italics or otherwise set off Jim's thoughts.
Author's Response:
Whoops! I thought they were in capitals... they were in my word doc anyway. Lol, I'm such a dunce! Thanks.