Date: 07/09/2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
I seriously love this story. The characters are spot on, giving the fic a TOS feeling despite being AU, a quality that I treasure above all. And I love the world-building. You make me see the apartment house in Frisco, feel the chill and smell the tea. And Spock as session musician? That's just awesome, my dear!
Looking forward to your updates and adding the story to my favourites.
Date: 09/26/2011 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this. What is Irn-Bru?
I really hope you keep going with this, I like your writing style. Also I am intrigued by what Spock's 'problem' may be?
Please write more?
Irn-Bru is a type of Scottish fizzy drink that is widely available in the UK.
I'm glad you like this! I'll try and carry on with it.
Date: 09/25/2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
So far it seems to be going well, enough back story to whet the appetite, a touch of foreshadowing. The rhythm seems natural which in fanfic is sometimes hard to do, many of us have so many plot threads spinning in our heads that we struggle not to weave them all in at once.
This has the beginnings of a fine story please continue I look forward to seeing the outcome.
Date: 08/18/2011 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start, Vulcan should be capitalized. You may want to use italics or otherwise set off Jim's thoughts.
Whoops! I thought they were in capitals... they were in my word doc anyway. Lol, I'm such a dunce! Thanks.