Date: 07/20/2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Brilliant!! Love it!
thank you glad that you liked it.
Date: 07/19/2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love this one very much....must be pon farr....very sad for Spock...needing Jim but is so scared...Spock thinking Jim will leave. Jim always comes through for his dear friend....
you are right that it is about pon farr. However, it is Kirk who fears that Spock will leave. Leave him and die. It isn't til the end of the poem that Kirk realizes that he too burns for his love. That is where the title comes from.