Date: 07/06/2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
I loved it! It stands perfectly as it is, no need of background data.
Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! i was a little worried it might come off as a little confusing without so much background exposition, glad it didn't go that way with you.
Date: 07/05/2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very Good, made me cry. such love in life. so good. xoxoxooxox
Author's Response: thank you very much! here, have a tissue. i wanted a good reason for Kirk to understand death, and his mother seemed like the perfect one to teach him to love life and understand death, especially since her influence is so often overlooked. i'm glad it resonated with you so much.
Date: 07/05/2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for being the first (in my opinion) to breathe some purpose into Winona Kirk...... Short but poignant.
Author's Response: thank you! i feel that Winona is often pushed to the sidelines, and i felt that - given the chance to - she could have been a very important influence on Jim. this is just the way my muse wanted her to be heard.