Date: 11/22/2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 2: Bareback Riding
Like this. Your writing is very 'loose' and there were a few times, especially early in the chapter when I had trouble figuring out what position they were in. The psychological/philosophical angle was interesting. Big thumbs up for the STI screening insert.
Date: 08/07/2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 3: Magellan's Revelation
Wow. Just couldnt think of anything else to say. Hope there is more chapters to come of this story. Your writing of Jim was so strong and I loved the partnership between him and Spock. It was so incredibly sexy.