Date: 07/03/2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooo, love the bottom Spock, and the radiation issue was rather creative. Not K/S, rather Kirk/Spock/Enterprise. You would have fit in on ASCEM.
Loved it but you need to do a proofreading runthrough because there were more than a few typos and at least one sentence that's rendered unintelligible as a result.
Other than that it's a just about perfect PWP. Like the old school interpretation of the characters and, heck, Bottom!Spock is just plain fun.
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review. Per your request, I have proofed it. You're right, it was in disgraceful shape! That's for tagging me.