Date: 06/05/2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 1
Don`t worry I won`t be mean.
I`m going to make your scream.
Faster, faster as I go.
Putting on quite a show.
I found a whoopsy, but that poem had me rolling. lol. Especially this part:
Care to dance mon choux?
In French, it means my sweet doodoo.
Not to be mistaken for the smelly cabbage.
You`d understand if you`d knew the language.
It's just so awkwardly hilarious.
Damn, it doesn't rhyme...crap....but yes that piece about the cabagge was nice ...wasn't it....thanks for the review.
Date: 06/04/2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
"You seem to have been, as it is termed, 'staring into space,' highly irrational since we are already in space, but you are quite fond of the phrase."
"It's nothing, Spock. I simply have something on my mind."