Date: 04/18/2013 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
I thought it only appropriate to inform you that I have been stalking your livejournal, and your ksarchive accounts, on an occational basis. In hopes, that I would find an update.
But alas, Spock remained oblivious to the childhood female Jim he met, whom is right smack in his face - this is a result of the story flow halting at said point of oblivion.
That being said, I wish you all the best in life - that naughty rascal is probably giving you a lot to deal with seeing as to how it kept you away from writing - and hope you do come back to the scene, eventually, and set things right between Spock and Jim.
A reader of yours
Date: 07/09/2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
PLEASE, PLEASE, OHHHHH PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I AM BEGGING YOU!!!! IT'S TOTALLY YOUR FAULT FOR GETTING ME HOOKED ON THIS STORY!!!! :) Now that my drama queen act is over, I am going to ask like an adult for you to please continue this story, it is very addicting.
Please and Thank You
Date: 06/17/2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
this is amazing!!! I love your story so so much!
please tell me you will continue it!! i've been checking every 3 days or so for about a month now to see if you'll update, but so far nothing.
please please please update soon!!!!!
Date: 03/05/2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMFG, you gut it up. I was waiting for the 6th. but you got it up early. SO VERY VERY VERY HAPPY TO SEE AND READ THE NEW CHAPTER . YOU ARE STILL MY ALL TIME FAV WRITER . XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOX. P.S. COULD YOU PLEASE THROW THAT CRAZY F***ING BITCH OUT OF A AIRLUCK. PLEASE. HATE HER SO MUCH. PRETTY BAD WHEN T'PRING IS A WONDERFUL KIND AND SWEET LADY COMPARE TO MISS LOONEY BIN. LOL SORRY.
Date: 03/05/2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa that Uhura is one messed up bitch. Time for Jim to come clean with Spock. I wonder who it was that kept Spock and Jim apart. Spock has certainly been faithful to his Thýla the same cannot be said of Jim. I wonder what Spocks reaction to that will be. Cant wait for Spock to meet his son Gabriel. Update soon please.
Date: 02/17/2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story. No wonder Spock did not remember Jim, he was a girl at the time. I do believe that Frank and Winona sent back the letters to Spock. I cant wait for Jim and Spock to finally be reunited and what Spocks reaction will be when he learns that he and Jim have a beautiful little son. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
Date: 11/22/2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
"Oh, fuck me sideways," cursed Jim. His hand frozen on his thigh Jim watched the thin stream of red drip to the tile floor at his feet. "Of all the days..."
Buwwwfwwwwwhahahahahaa!!!! Okay, the gender mess was worth it, just for this.
Smirking, Leonard headed away from where Captain Pike was recovering. It would be best to let the older man try to sway Spock back to the right side. Twiddle-Dee and Twiddle-Dum couldn’t seem to fix their relationship on their own but Leonard had too much on his own plate at the moment to try and take up that lost cause.
lol, always the yenta
I really like your story and all the things you have come up with and I hope you will post more!
Date: 11/22/2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
If it was just an earthquake then they might need general aid or supplies but it wouldn’t need half the fleet to come rushing in. Had the Vulcan’s even really sent the message? Did Starfleet even try to verify it before sending them out?
Date: 11/22/2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2
I have so notes if you decide to edit this story:
Your auto-correct changes "Gaila" to "galia" (it's a type of melon) several times in an earlier chapter.
You don't have to capitalize mother and father if they aren't being addressed directly. "My mother," "his father" do not get capitalized, but "Come on, Mom!" does.
I think the reason you got negative feedback on this and the prior chapter is because it's a little bit annoying to read through every line of dialogue from the movie. Seriously, you can gloss over dialect that isn't important to the story you want to tell. We've all seen the movie so you can just refer to stuff that happened and we'll know what you mean. Then you can ease into the part of dialogue that you're changing for this story.
I like the sneaky bit where Spock transports onto the Enterprise. At least, I thought that's what he was doing?
Not knowing where to go for sollance
He was still an perverted asshat and a douche bag for coming onboard and tearing Spock apart while he was still grieving.
lmao @ uhura calling him a douchebag
Not willing to pretend he hadn’t just seen Spock engaging in an illicit kiss with his student, and hurting, Jim turned to Spock trying to take one last jab. “So shacking up with your students now, how very logical.”
Date: 11/22/2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
It would be a black mark on her otherwise spotless record and Spock was of the opinion that it could very well cost her a more promising posting after graduation.
Oh, snap. I always thought this scene reflected badly on both of them, but you've definitely given it a new color. And, yes, I have seen people do this to themselves, too many damn times to count.
“Ow! Stop it!” Jim turned to glare at Bones before looking down the narrow corridor between…well, Bones didn’t rightly know what those large steel containers were or why the xenolingustics desks were there by them.
lololol b/c JJ Abrams thought Dewars looked "industrial". Also, apparently he's cheap and easy.
I will never look at Dewars the same way after reading "Frozen," though. Don't look it up on Amazon if you're easily grossed out.