Date: 03/21/2015 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this was some truly, truly brilliant writing hon! I am on the edge of my seat wanting to see what happens next!
I must say, I cannot stant Uhura in this, she is such a rotten cow and a I dearly hope that she will at some point have the real truth of Jim's character slaped across her face as your Jim is no hoe, lol!
Please, please, please, please come back to this fic when you have the chance, it's far too good of a sory not to be finished and I CANNOT WAIT to see Jim & Spock get back together again... PLEASE!?
Date: 09/29/2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh please please please write more. i'm begging this story is so good! I love it and keep re-reading it hoping you will update. Please please do your writing is incredible and amazingly done and captivating and just completly and utterly awesome!
Date: 08/13/2013 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 5
So...i read the whole 3 chapters at once...in fact, i read this fic and the first part "A Trick from Eros", without writing a single review...yes...i'm that bad. But since the begining i watched that you haven't update this since .... like a year ago. So i though..."she/he (don't know what gender you are) won't probably read this... In fact, why the hell i'm going to read it, if it isn't finished? WTF, let's read it!"
Now this is my face -_-
Not because it was bad, but because it was GOOD. The plot was/is really interesting, and the way you developed the characters? Brilliant! But i'm sad i rwad it...i regreat doing it, because now i'll keep thinking "what happens next?"
Is sad when authors do that, but i'm thinking you must have a lot of work, or...maybe you are studying... Real Life is a bitch.
So, hope you read this, because i believe you would apreciate my congrats for such an amazing fic, but at the same time...well...what i said before.
Wow. That is one heck of a review! :)
I am working on this fic still and am currently about halfway through the next chapter. I have also been planning on re-writing parts of the prequel, A Trick of Eros. So there may be new chapters to add to it in the future. I am crossing my fingers that I can get enough free time to finish the new chapter in the next month or two. And I feel horrible that I have been making people wait this long but RL and a nasty case fo writers block has been attacking me like a plague. So please bear with me.
Date: 04/22/2013 12:17 PM Title: Prologue
I really wish this was finished I simply love it
Date: 04/18/2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
I thought it only appropriate to inform you that I have been stalking your livejournal, and your ksarchive accounts, on an occational basis. In hopes, that I would find an update.
But alas, Spock remained oblivious to the childhood female Jim he met, whom is right smack in his face - this is a result of the story flow halting at said point of oblivion.
That being said, I wish you all the best in life - that naughty rascal is probably giving you a lot to deal with seeing as to how it kept you away from writing - and hope you do come back to the scene, eventually, and set things right between Spock and Jim.
A reader of yours
Date: 07/10/2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
PLEASE, PLEASE, OHHHHH PLEASE!!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! I AM BEGGING YOU!!!! IT'S TOTALLY YOUR FAULT FOR GETTING ME HOOKED ON THIS STORY!!!! :) Now that my drama queen act is over, I am going to ask like an adult for you to please continue this story, it is very addicting.
Please and Thank You
Date: 06/17/2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
this is amazing!!! I love your story so so much!
please tell me you will continue it!! i've been checking every 3 days or so for about a month now to see if you'll update, but so far nothing.
please please please update soon!!!!!
Date: 03/05/2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMFG, you gut it up. I was waiting for the 6th. but you got it up early. SO VERY VERY VERY HAPPY TO SEE AND READ THE NEW CHAPTER . YOU ARE STILL MY ALL TIME FAV WRITER . XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXXOXOXOXOX. P.S. COULD YOU PLEASE THROW THAT CRAZY F***ING BITCH OUT OF A AIRLUCK. PLEASE. HATE HER SO MUCH. PRETTY BAD WHEN T'PRING IS A WONDERFUL KIND AND SWEET LADY COMPARE TO MISS LOONEY BIN. LOL SORRY.
Date: 03/05/2012 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
Whoa that Uhura is one messed up bitch. Time for Jim to come clean with Spock. I wonder who it was that kept Spock and Jim apart. Spock has certainly been faithful to his Thýla the same cannot be said of Jim. I wonder what Spocks reaction to that will be. Cant wait for Spock to meet his son Gabriel. Update soon please.