Date: 11/26/2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
regret to shatter youre illusion, but there is a plot, even symbolic:
Lilith (Jim) tempts the human (Spock) by the end, the human ,after tasting the forbidden fruit (wine) tempts Lilith back shamelessly whit submission .
Add the fact that McCoy lost his innocence (exposed to the sights above) marks the end of Garden of Eden.
What do you think?
Author's Response: I think you're very kind, but attributing more thought than I had! ;)
Date: 06/14/2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I needed a cold shower after reading this story, it was so hot and sexy. Just what the doctor ordered. Loved the bit when Spock realised that Jim hadn't been drinking pricless and even more when he kissed Jim in public and Bones fell off his seat. Yummy. More please.
Author's Response: thank you! I will certainly be writing more soon :)
Date: 06/14/2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Another delightful story from a delightful writer. I had the good fortune of reading this story during a thunderstorm, and your writing was so descririptive, I could almost imagine that if I looked out my window I would see Kirk and Spock going at it in the rain :D Very well done, as per usual.
Author's Response: And a delightful review. Thank you. I do appreciate it, and I'm glad you had some good imaginings!
Date: 06/14/2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
For some reason I couldn't stop thinking about Anthony Weiner when I read this (cringe). Maybe I'll have to come back in 6 mo.s when this whole thing blows over. (Yes, everything is a double entendre now.)
Author's Response: Never heard of him!
Date: 06/13/2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, really hot! Love their passion in the rain. And even more that Kirk was not inebriated at that time!
Spock's kissing him in public seems a bit OOC, I'd thought they would maybe sneak a Vulcan kiss or share some other sign of affection which is not too much PDA. But McCoy's falling of the bench is worth it!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was a bit OOC all in all, but what the hell! thanks for the review :)
Date: 06/13/2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh you sneaky devil you...sneaky....and how I loved the ending..I knew it would work somehow... this piece is mere perfection....Thanks for sharing again...wink wink...
Author's Response: I did say I'd write it (ahem) properly one day...! M x