Date: 06/18/2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awwww. Poor Spock! THis is beautiful, really lovely. What I like about your poems is that every line counts, every line could stand on its own as beautiful....
Date: 06/18/2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ahh, this is sweet :)
And it has a sort of dreamlike quality, too...
Date: 06/18/2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I want my angel of the morning, baby
Just hold my hand before you leave me, baby
Just calling my angel of the morning, angel
Until he turns away
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2011 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I don't usually go for poetry, mostly because I suck at writing it and have only done so when school assignments forced me to, but I think you do great stuff! I'm also really glad to see you putting pictures with your stories, since I can't see all of them on the art site you direct the readers to.
Author's Response: Well thank you very much..I wish I could write like you....just can't do it...and about the pics..they'll be here from now on....I had posted them in a different place which had been removed by the archives but she did say I could upload them after the story...and as far as poetry goes...I try to write as simple as possible and not too long...and being literally visual with an image brings it all together and never makes it boring...again many thanks for your review....
[Report This]Date: 06/05/2011 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh dam! This is amazing! So bittersweet. Full of angst, yet beautiful in the discription. Just love this sooooo much. I'm adding it to my faves.
Author's Response: Thanks so much dear soul...Ah....hugs....