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Reviewer: atymer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/03/2013 3:25 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

It is fantastic to read the canon characters in such a well executed Alternate Universe. Although their lives are so different, their essential bravery and vunerability remains clear. The author weaves wonderful stories and being a history buff myself, the comparisons to events in earth history made the read even more enjoyable. The sparkles of humor that are essential to good ST tales, enlivened the story.

Kudos to the author because I had to read it straight through. Very well done.



Author's Response:

TYVM

Reviewer: veralidaine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/08/2012 1:17 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Wow...just wow.  This was an amazing journey and I'm so glad I got to take it (I'm slowly working through all your stories lol).  I especially love how, even though there are some similarities to The King's Speech, this is still very much its own, unique story.

Reviewer: Kyuubi no Kitsune Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/19/2012 3:15 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Just so you know I now have to go see this movie. I have no idea how you create such a rich universe and tapestry of characters. Amazing! Cookies and Chocolate for you! maybe an internet pony yes I think you deserve a pony.

Author's Response:

Yes, I defintely deserve a pony. Glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: Mary Kay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2011 8:46 PM Title: The Vulcan Federation of Planets

Totally enjoyed this story from beginning to end!



Author's Response:

Glad you did.

Reviewer: magpie1600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/2011 9:35 AM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Awh wonderful end. Loved the bit of reconcilation. Well done.  Hope you are feeling better.

Reviewer: Vulcan Pearl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 9:51 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Okay, a couple questions.  The emperor didn't seem too repentant about all the things he'd done against Spock, even if it wasn't really his fault.  He also didn't seem to upset about the death of his mother, unless it hadn't sunk in yet.  He had Ty'Lena killed, but that might have just been for manipulating him at all.  Also, you said that Jim is the first human to be crowned co-ruler of Vulcan.  Does that mean that Amanda was never a queen or an empress?  Okay, that's all.

This has been an amazing story.  With every challenge you take on, you go far beyond the requirements and turn it into a story that's just an adventure to read.  I look forward to more updates on your current challenges, and the ones you'll do in the future!



Author's Response:

The emperor's Romulan. They don't say they're sorry. Amanda was Sarek's consort, not co-ruler. Traditionally, the two roles have different levels of authority and power. Glad you liked the story.

Reviewer: shamrock220 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 5:56 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Bravo! Partners in the Monarchy as well as life partners. Perfect symmetry.

Well my friend this one was truly a wild ride. However you handled everything with your usual attention to detail and kept true to the character's voices.

As Always WELL DONE!
Shamrock220

Reviewer: de_gnome Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 5:45 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Awesome.

Although I would like to have seen the bitch suffer a bit more for what she had done, this was a brilliant ending and I loved the last line :)

Reviewer: MyriadProBold Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 5:23 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

This is a great final chapter. I'm ready to watch the kings speach again. Maybe tonight.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 5:15 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Holy Trumpets of Triumph, Batwoman! You has done undid yourself! Wonderful wrap-up. Wonderful story.

"Throw her out an airlock."--elegant, that.

And the pauses in the speech gave it more weight, I think.

And the arrest scene was so cool.

Ok, I went backwards. Lol.

Reviewer: Katrinna Le Fay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 5:09 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

I want to thank you for having invested so much time in this story.
I want to thank you for writing this dramatically story and that I love
Thanks for each of the chapters, now whenever I see "the king's speech," I'll think of you and this wonderful story.
Thank you for being who you are.
I wish you the best in the world, always supporting you and hoping you are well.
You're great.



Author's Response:

TYTY

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 4:54 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Hurrah!!  What a wonderful story!  I'm sorry that Ty'Lena had to go out an airlock, but that's just me.  No punishment would have been secure enough for that viper.  I think Jim getting 200 years of peace with the Romulans is an excellent thing.  And co-ruler?  Rock on!  This was great, it was totally a CMM story, and that's the biggest compliment I can give it.  Thank you so much.



Author's Response:

I thought about cdragging out Ty'Lena's end, but the Vulcans would have put her in prison and tried to rehabilitate her; it seemed more likely that Jaron would jsut throw her out an airlock and be done with it.

Reviewer: niphredil Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 3:52 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

This chapter is fantastic. I like how Spock handles the speech. And when Jim comes back. And the last paragraph. Even though I'm sad it ends, I really like how you wrote this ending. It lets my imagination running. Thank you so much.



Author's Response:

TY. I wanted people to be able to imagine their lives after the story ends.

Reviewer: CORGIMOM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 3:37 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Listen... hear that? It's a standing ovation!! Awesome story. Enjoyed it from beginning to end. This is one of those that I will curl up with from start to finish numerous times. Just loved it!!



Author's Response:

TYVM. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Frankly, this one wore me out.

Reviewer: Vulcanlady Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 2:43 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

So glad you finished this one, very nice happy ending!! Hope you will find time to write the next chapter of "The Vulcan who fell to earth" cause I really love that story!! But I enjoy everything you write so just do what you have in mind!! Love from Holland!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it will be back; I promise. Thanks for reading. :)

Reviewer: sierra scarlet Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 2:09 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

So, I quite nearly melted into fangirl goop when McCoy gave Spock his pep talk. I also figured Sulu would do something to protect Jim when he was there with him. I'm glad Ty'Lena got airlocked - she's too tricksy to be trusted in a cage in my mind... I love how Jaron decided to kill her anyways. And of course, they're now co-rulers.

 

This is one of your best stories so far (although I enjoy all of them) and I'm glad I could read it start to finish as you wrote it. Wonderful work ^_^



Author's Response:

Thanks for hanging in until the end. Life sort of got in the way on this one.

Reviewer: Wingstar102 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/08/2011 1:14 PM Title: To the Edge of Disaster--and Beyond

Yeah! Ty'Lena being thrown out of an airlock was fair justic as far as I'm concerned. Bitch earned it. I'm actually kinda happy Jaron survived. Poor bastard was drugged and not in his right mind. And definitely happy that General Eveh was a good guy. Fantastic end to a fantastic story! Can't wait to find out what other fics you come up with. LOL. Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,

Wingstar

Reviewer: natwest Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/2011 9:55 AM Title: Where Angels Fear to Tread

I really love this story. I hope that Sarek get his hands on Le Shen. She deserve to go down.

Reviewer: ForgottenOne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/05/2011 12:42 PM Title: Where Angels Fear to Tread

*dances*  You're doing a bang-up job with this story.  Heavens, I fall behind due to RL and I try to catch up but I'm always behind.  Help me here -- my email says I'm supposed to be reading chapter 41, but I'm only to 40.  Is that an error on my part or theirs?  I'm at the edge of my seat wondering how they're going to take Ty'Lena down and I don't want to miss a second of the action.  You're doing spectacular, keep it up!  I'm cheering you on!



Author's Response:

No, I'd put in a short "note" chapter after my mother had the heart attack, telling people why I wasn't updating. Then I deleted it and added teh latest chapter, so you're up to speed.

Reviewer: oyboh Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/2011 8:59 AM Title: Where Angels Fear to Tread

wow--I was really afraid there was gonna be a romeo-and-juliet there for a few minutes!

oc now I'm scared the gloating imperial horsesasses are too clever in their evil to be easily overtaken....

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