Date: 05/31/2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ha ha! This is great :)
What I really love about your poems is that they have a real TOS feel - that comic, bouncy energy yet with a very poignant and serious undertone. This poem is very funny, as we see the two men dancing around each other in the way that they do, yet we also know that underneath Kirk is quite lonely and confused. Will Spock end up in his bunk tonight? I sure hope so :D
Thanks Nell. I was giggling as I was writing it...It's fun to write a poem with rhyme that isn't saccharin filled.