Reviews For Drunk On Love
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Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ha ha!  This is great :)

What I really love about your poems is that they have a real TOS feel - that comic, bouncy energy yet with a very poignant and serious undertone.  This poem is very funny, as we see the two men dancing around each other in the way that they do, yet we also know that underneath Kirk is quite lonely and confused.  Will Spock end up in his bunk tonight?  I sure hope so :D



Author's Response:

Thanks Nell. I was giggling as I was writing it...It's fun to write a poem with rhyme that isn't saccharin filled.

Reviewer: VCVZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

"In Vino Veritas"
I laugh as
Jim, very drunk,
Shows his true spunk
Go get him, Spock!
Maybe after he sleeps like a rock

Reviewer: Bastet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Teehee this was cute.

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