Reviews For Kohlinahr
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Reviewer: CMM Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2011 11:33 PM Title: Kohlinahr

I like this a lot. I'm not a fan of 'moon, June, spoon' pieces, so this is refreshing. Don't worry too much about puncuation in this; it's free verse; the rules are pretty relaxed.

Reviewer: nothingcomestomind Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2011 10:01 PM Title: Kohlinahr

Very nice. I rarely read poetry, but glad I took a moment for this one.

Reviewer: Dahliaxat Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2011 6:51 PM Title: Kohlinahr

I like what you have done here..Quick thoughts of what he is feeling...good job.

Reviewer: Tydomin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2011 5:44 PM Title: Kohlinahr

Yeah, it's good.  I liked seeing their different viewpoints.  You've definitely got something good going on here, but maybe a little work on punctuation wouldn't go amiss...

Author's Response:

I quess I got fed up ... spent all weekend putting punctuation in a story I'm having beta'd. Wondered too if I should use invered commas in poetry, any thoughts.

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