Date: 10/28/2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is so much more satisfying than most. The psychological insight, the consideration of what Spock's situation would actually be like, the depth and realness of this story all combine to produce a truly gorgeous whole.
Date: 04/10/2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
I thoroughly enjoyed this wonderful analysis of the potential pitfalls of post fal-tor-pan bondmates. It's both subtle and strikingly in your face at times, which seems to work well for TOS k/s on so many levels. I particularly enjoyed the sense of humour with which you imbued pre fal-tor-pan Spock; I think it's a quality that is often overlooked by writers, partuclarly newer TOS writers who compare Nimoy's Spock to Quinto's. Mems.
Date: 04/09/2011 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story is amazing. Jim's emotions, his conflict, were so clear and believeable and well-rendered. Thanks for such an enjoyable read.
Date: 04/08/2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this was beautiful. It was great for me to stretch the bounds of my comfort zone; the thought of Spock not being faithful was painful. But it all worked out best in the end. So much was dealt with in your story. The necessity of deciding to bond again, whether each wanted it, and how they were going to continue their lives. Together or apart? I didn't really consider Spock's memory and whether he got everything back. The things he is missing are memories I would have taken for granted. The ending was wonderful. I'm glad everything worked out for the best. See, it's stories like yours that make me wish I could get these 'zines. Great work, thanks for sharing it here for all of us.