Date: 04/22/2012 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is this the prequel to rain? I enjoyed both on their own, but they do seem to go together - kind of like the two slices of bread in a sandwich. Now we just need the filling . . . *whistles wistfully, staring off into the sunset*
Sorry to disappoint, but Rain and Valediction are from two completely separate ‘verses. I picture Rain to be a glimpse at the aftermath of a scouting/diplomatic mission gone terribly awry, and Valediction to be a look at the inevitable consequence of the Klingons being in possession of 24th century technology for nearly three decades (beyond it being a deliberate bait and switch).
In all likelihood, I will return to these two ‘verses for future one-shots, but as of this moment I don’t have anything in the works.
Thank you for reading them both and reviewing :)
Date: 03/26/2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Nice angsty piece. I actually enjoy open-ended stories that let my imagination run wild. This is the reason I love Hitchock.
Thank you for this. Hugs
I'm glad I could feed your imagination. Thanks for the hug, and the review.
Date: 03/26/2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
I spent half this story trying in vain to figure out what I missed, and the other half going "NO!!" This was one heck of a story, and I'm personally thrilled that you wrote it. I've been on a fluff binge lately, and it's always good to read a story that doesn't end in "happily ever after" for once. As for you being "beat to death with a shoe" don't worry, I'm barefoot. I WOULD greatly appreciate a little something more, but even if it never materializes I'm still honored to have read this. Thank you so much.
I confess that most of the stories I read are fluffy, which drives me to write pieces like this. I'm so glad you enjoyed reading.
Date: 03/26/2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ohh. This could be a very nice prequel to a much bigger story. I wasn't expecting that nice little twist. Everyone usually gets lulled into thinking Spock is leaving for Gol at the end of the five year mission. I would love to see a continuation of this.
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/25/2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I hope this will continue in some form. Lots of unanswered questions. What war? Are they lovers or were they just planning to be? If they do bond, how does that affect them when they're separated?
I am going to contiue this story, but I don't think it will be posted for some time. Thank you so much for reviewing.