Date: 09/04/2014 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet, I love the way both of them recognize the intensity of what there is between them and at this point act upon it with openness, no angst, no doubts, few hesitations. A deep honesty of emotions the allows for a joyfull joining, tender and passionate and RIGHT.
Thank you! I'm glad to hear that their forwarding their relationship without doubt or angst worked for you. I tend to think of them as grown men, and try to write them as such. :-) Again, thanks, for reading and for your lovely comments!
Date: 04/28/2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
sweeet!! I liked this -- what can I say, am a sucker for rings apparently, who knew? :)
Author's Response: The things we learn about ourselves, right? *g* So glad you liked it, Greywolf—thanks for reading and commenting!
Date: 03/25/2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Aw. :) Very cute story, thanks so much for digging it up and posting it for our reading pleasure! It was fun to see how methodical Spock was preparing for this evening with his Captain - who's only 30 steps away! (for some reason that tiny bit struck me as incredibly funny). And I bet Spock's the only person aorund who's call jeans "denim pants" ;))) It was easy to guess what Jim was leading up to with his long roundabout speech, but I lvoed how Spock perceived the slow intertwining of their lives through it.ovnd my heart totally went out to Jim when Spock accidentally burst his bubble and killed the mood...but fortunately the Vulcan saw his mistake immediately and fixed things up! Very thoughtful and well-chosen present on Jim's part for his beloved friend :). Thanks Gilda!
Author's Response: You're very welcome! Thank you for the very wonderful comments! And you're probably right about the jeans. *g*